Revision report

Major Giving

mhmg-demo

4 new design3 changed1 please confirm
  1. MG1Filter by who it helps
  2. MG2Filter by theme
  3. MG3Form at the top on mobile
  4. MG4Reel cards: why people gave
  5. MG5Crowdfund any project
  6. MG6Feedback report instead of plaque
  7. MG7More about the project, less selling
  8. MG8Real impact with the donor's personal story

Sponsor an Orphan

mhsw-demo/orphans

3 new design4 changed3 removed
  1. O1Compact switcher instead of breadcrumbs
  2. O2Whiteboard module removed
  3. O3Photo header with the key points; video moved down
  4. O4“On this page” contents
  5. O5What's included, as an explore map
  6. O6Donor testimonial up front
  7. O7Religious message moved to the bottom
  8. O8Price labels removed from the news-style rows
  9. O9Underlines removed
  10. O10One font family throughout

Gift of Water

mhsw-demo/water

3 new design2 changed1 removed
  1. W1Simpler, shorter page
  2. W2Carousel of every water item
  3. W3Opens on the Safe Water Fund
  4. W4Breadcrumbs removed
  5. W5Giving in someone's name, told as a story
  6. W6Filter by location, well type and cost

Zakat

mhz-demo/zakat-page-d

2 new design
  1. Z1Make it obvious it's a helpful AI tool
  2. Z2Three-column AI workspace

8 points · mhmg-demo

Major Giving

New page order: Hero, the need now, why they gave (reels), projects by theme and by who they help, the sample feedback report, impact stories, film, consultation form, FAQs. Project pages lead with the need and a case study.

MG1

Filter by who it helps

Changed
FeedbackFilter: Beneficiary categories rather than numbers i.e. orphans, widows, people with disabilities, refugees

What changed

The Beneficiaries filter (900+, 1,000+, 1,200+ people) is now Who it helps: Everyone, Orphans, Widows, People with disabilities and Refugees. Each project is tagged with every group it serves, the tags show on the card, and the dropdown shows how many projects match each group before you pick one.

Why

Donors at this level usually arrive with a group of people in mind, not a headcount. Tags rather than one category per project mean a well beside an orphan school shows under both Orphans and Widows. The live counts stop anyone choosing a filter that returns nothing.

Before

Beneficiaries filter, sorted by headcount

After

Who it helps, with a count per group

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Filtered to People with disabilities
MG2

Filter by theme

Changed
FeedbackFilter: Thematic rather than donation items i.e. water, hunger, livelihoods, education, health

What changed

Donation item (Dig a Well, Hope Shop, Livelihood, Build a Masjid) is replaced by Theme: Water, Hunger, Livelihoods, Education and Health. The themes also sit above the finder as one-tap chips with live counts. So the filter has something to filter, the catalogue now holds 15 open projects across all five themes and six countries (it was ten wells in Pakistan).

Why

Chips put the themes in view before anyone opens a dropdown, which matters on a phone where the finder is long. Each theme keeps one colour and icon everywhere it appears (chip, card badge, need ribbon, project page), so the cause reads at a glance.

Content to confirmThe 14 new projects, their prices and their copy are indicative until the Major Giving team sends real project briefs.

Before

Donation item filter

After

Theme chips and Theme filter

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One tap on Health, on a phone
MG3

Form at the top on mobile

Please confirm
FeedbackForm needs to be at the top in mobile view.

What changed

On phones, the call-back form now comes straight after the section heading, ahead of the phone and email details and the three steps; before, it was at the very bottom of a long section. On project pages, the card for funding the project now sits directly under the cover on mobile, instead of after all the content.

How we read it

The hero's “One-to-one consultation” button now lands on the form itself. We read “the form” as the enquiry forms. If the team meant a short form inside the hero, that is a small change to make.

Before

Home: form below details and steps

After

Home: form straight after the heading

Before

Project page: content first, form at the end

After

Project page: funding card under the cover
MG4

Reel cards: why people gave

New design
FeedbackReel cards breaking down the journey of a project? Address why people gave.

What changed

A new Why they gave section near the top of the page holds three reel cards (“For my father”, “For my parents”, “Instead of an Eid gift”) and a fourth card inviting your own reason. Tapping one opens a story viewer that steps through a single gift: why they gave, the need, planning, building, handover and the report. It advances on its own, with tap, arrow and pause controls, and the last step links to the full story and the call-back form.

Why it looks like this

Reels are a format donors already scroll every day, so stepping through one is instinctive on a phone. Opening on the donor's reason and dedication answers “why did people give?” before any price appears. Every reel ends on the feedback report, so the guarantee is part of the story. The same slides can be exported as real Instagram or TikTok reels.

Content to confirmNadia, Sarah and Imran's journeys are placeholders built on the demo's existing quotes. Real, consented stories are needed.

Before

No journey content; the closest was star-rated quote cards

After

Reel cards

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Story viewer, step 2: the need
Story viewer on a phone
MG5

Crowdfund any project

New design
FeedbackInsert crowdfunding button on each project – so donors can choose to crowdfund for the project.

What changed

Every project card now has a Crowdfund button next to Fund in full, and projects with a live campaign show a progress bar. The button opens a crowdfunding sheet: who the page is for (in memory of, in honour of), an optional starting gift, and a live preview of the fundraising page, ending with a link to share. On the project page, the side card now has two tabs: Fund in full and Crowdfund it.

Why it looks like this

This gives donors who can't fund £8,000 or more alone a way in, without diluting the major-gift route. The live preview shows exactly what family and friends will see before you commit. Asking who the page is for ties fundraising to the personal reasons the reels and stories show.

Content to confirmDemo only: no page is created. The fundraising link format and the totals on four projects are placeholders.

Before

Cards with a single “Plan this well” action

After

Crowdfund and Fund in full on every card

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Crowdfunding sheet with live page preview
Project page: Crowdfund it tab
MG6

Feedback report instead of plaque

New design
FeedbackShow feedback report example more useful than filling in a plaque

What changed

The “Whose name will your well carry?” plaque builder is removed. The 100% Feedback Guarantee section now holds a five-page sample report you can page through: cover and dedication, before and after, the exact location with GPS, impact and the water test, and the plaque and community voices. Naming a project moved to an optional “Dedicate it to someone” field in the forms. On project pages, the plaque wall became What you will receive: that project's report cover, which fills in the dedication as you type it.

Why it looks like this

Proof is what a major donor needs, and the plaque was only one line of it. The page list on the left doubles as a checklist of what every report contains. The sample uses the Rajanpur tube well already in the hero photo (plaque ID 6024602), so it reads as a real document.

Content to confirmSwap in pages and figures from a real report.

Before

Plaque builder

After

Sample report, page 1

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Page 4: impact and water test
Project page: your report's cover, with the dedication filled in
MG7

More about the project, less selling

Changed
FeedbackCurrent design pushes too much for sale, but does not offer enough information about the project (the need in the specific village, current situation, beneficiary case study)

What changed

Project pages now open with the need. Life in Multan today describes the situation and gives four key facts (current water source, round trip, households, widow-headed homes). Meet Rukhsana, 41 is a case study with her quote. Only then does the page cover what the gift builds. The cover introduction leads with the need, and cards on the home page show “The need” and who it helps. The ribbon under the hero now names the need in each place instead of counting beneficiaries, and the hard-sell wording (“Plan this well”, “Start this project”) is gone. Pages adapt to every theme, including the timeline and what is included.

Why

The order is need, then person, then plan, then price. The facts are short labelled values, so they scan like a briefing. Asking remains one click away in the side card, but it no longer leads.

Content to confirmThe situations, facts and case studies are indicative and need the field team's real details.

Before

Project page: “The gift” leads, price beside it

After

Project page: the need in Multan leads

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Case study from the village
Works for every theme: an eye camp
MG8

Real impact with the donor's personal story

New design
FeedbackShow real impact with real case studies and combine with a real testimonial. Add their personal story (e.g. in the memory of my parents) – how can this be laid out?

What changed

“Stories of real impact” (star-rated quote cards behind a Donors / Beneficiaries toggle) became Why they gave, and what it changed. Each story is a three-part spread: 1 Why they gave (dedication banner, personal story, testimonial), 2 What it built (project, place, completion date, impact figures) and 3 What it changed (a beneficiary's before and after, in their words). Tabs switch between stories, and on a phone the three parts stack in order.

Why it looks like this

This answers “how can this be laid out?”: donor and beneficiary sit in one frame, so cause and effect read left to right. The dedication banner gives “in memory of my parents” the prominence it has for the donor. The stars are gone, because they made a gift read like a product review.

Content to confirmStory content is a placeholder pending real, consented case studies.

Before

Star-rated quote cards

After

Three-part story spread: “In memory of her parents”

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On a phone, the parts stack in order

10 points · mhsw-demo/orphans

Sponsor an Orphan

O1

Compact switcher instead of breadcrumbs

New design
FeedbackBreadcrumbs menu is taking up too much space. Replace for expandable menu to show other options once expanded.

What changed

The row of four sponsorship links (three lines tall on a phone) is replaced by a single pill above the title: Child sponsorship: Orphan Sponsorship ▾. Tapping it expands a short list of the sibling pages (Sponsor a child, Orphan, Disabled Child, Hifz Student), with the current page ticked. It closes on Esc, a tap outside or tabbing away.

Why it looks like this

The menu now takes one line at every width, and you can always see which page you are on. Placing it just above the title makes it read like a label and keeps it off the children's faces in the photo. It is a plain expandable list rather than a dropdown menu, so it works the same with a keyboard, a screen reader or a thumb.

Before

Breadcrumbs on a phone: three lines

After

One pill above the title

Before

Breadcrumbs on desktop

After

Expanded, showing the other options
O2

Whiteboard module removed

Removed
FeedbackWhat's included module with whiteboard needs to be scrapped as the programme is not consistent across the locations.

What changed

The chalkboard “What is included in the sponsorship?” section is gone, together with its £29.50 badge, the chalk-style tags and the “How your £29.50 reaches them” pull-out. Its slot now holds the new What's included map (see O5), which says where each item applies.

Before

Chalkboard infographic

After

Replaced by the What's included map, with a note that every location is different
O3

Photo header with the key points; video moved down

Changed
FeedbackMove video further down – header should be an image with key orphan points at the top of page.

What changed

The header is now a full-width photo with the title, the £29.50 line and the main button. Directly beneath it, a band in the header blue lists the five key points: £29.50 a month (98p a day); education, plus meals and health checks where available; an orphan pack, then an annual report with a new photo; Zakat and Sadaqah eligible; and 33 locations. The appeal video now has its own Watch the appeal section further down, after the stories.

Why

The title and the key facts are on the first screen of a phone and a laptop. The points are static and scannable, where the old strip kept moving, so they replace that strip on this page rather than repeat it. The photo was chosen so the text sits on its soft-focus side and never covers a face.

Content to confirmTwo key-point lines are new wording (“Plus meals and health checks where available”, “Eligible for both”). Please confirm them, and the choice of photo.

Before

Opened on the appeal video

After

Photo header with the five key points

Before

Video first on a phone

After

Title and key points together on a phone
O4

“On this page” contents

New design
FeedbackCreate a contents to skip to relevant content

What changed

A row of contents chips sits under the header: What's included, A sponsor's story, Orphan lives, Watch the appeal, FAQs and Follow the Sunnah. On desktop the row sticks under the main header as you scroll and highlights the section you are reading. On a phone it scrolls sideways, and the menu's “On this page” list matches it.

Why it looks like this

Chips are large, easy targets that work the same at every width. The current section is shown with a filled chip rather than an underline, in line with O9. On phones the row doesn't stick, to keep screen space for content; the burger menu covers jumping around from deep in the page.

Before

No contents; just the scrolling strip

After

Sticky contents, with the current section filled

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Sideways chips on a phone
O5

What's included, as an explore map

New design
FeedbackExplore orphans lives module – also create for showing what is included in sponsorship

What changed

A second drag-to-explore map, in blue, built like Explore orphan lives. It has twelve cards: where the £24 goes, school fees and books, teachers and classrooms, health checks, meals, transport, support for guardians at other schools, the orphan pack, the annual report, Eid gifts, support until 18, and a closing card with the sponsor button. Every card is tagged with where it applies (All locations, Muslim Hands schools, Varies by location, Optional extra). A note above the map reads: “What your sponsorship covers depends on the child's country; your orphan pack confirms exactly what's provided.”

Why it looks like this

The team liked the explore map, so reusing it makes “what's included” something to discover rather than a list to read. Because the programme differs by country, the location tag is on every card and the caveat comes first, so nothing reads as a promise for every child. What the sponsor receives (pack, report, gifts) is shown on white notes, apart from what the child receives.

Content to confirmThe page's own copy disagrees on where health checks and uniform apply. The sponsorship team should confirm each card's location tag. Card titles and the £24 note are new short copy.

Before

The Explore orphan lives map, the pattern reused

After

What's included map, with a location tag on every card

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Swipe to explore on a phone
O6

Donor testimonial up front

Changed
FeedbackDonor testimonial is important

What changed

A sponsor's story now opens with a large testimonial from Sister Azipha, who sponsors Siddiqui with her family: her photo, her words in large type, and a two-line account of meeting him. It sits high on the page, straight after What's included. Hiba's and her mother's quotes follow underneath as supporting voices, under “And from the families you support”.

Why

A sponsor speaking to future sponsors is the most persuasive voice on the page, so it gets the largest type and the strongest colour. The families' quotes back it up instead of competing with it at the same size.

Content to confirmThe large quote reuses the existing story sentence as Sister Azipha's own words. Please confirm the wording with her, or send a direct quote. Her video is still not public.

Before

Sponsor visit and quotes at equal weight

After

Sponsor testimonial leads, families support it

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On a phone
O7

Religious message moved to the bottom

Changed
FeedbackReligious message can be at the bottom (is common knowledge)

What changed

Follow the Sunnah was the first section under the header. It now sits after the FAQs, before “Other ways to help”. It is also shorter: the lead paragraph (orphans mentioned 22 times in the Qur'an), the Zakat and Sadaqah Jariyah paragraph, and the hadith card. The paragraph repeating what's included and the decorative photo are gone.

Before

Whole page: Follow the Sunnah (red outline) was second

After

Whole page: now near the end

Before

The section before

After

Condensed section
O8

Price labels removed from the news-style rows

Removed
FeedbackRemove the price handle for the news style module

What changed

The “£30 A MONTH”, “£27 A MONTH”, “FROM £10” and “FROM £22” labels are gone from the four “Other ways to help a child” rows. Each row is now a title, one line and a photo.

Before

With price labels

After

Without
O9

Underlines removed

Removed
FeedbackRemove underlining – not needed

What changed

The underlined highlights in body copy are gone, and so is the underline on the “Other ways to help” titles: the whole row is the link, and the title turns navy on hover. Links in the FAQ answers and the donation menu are now navy and bold instead of underlined. These changes apply to the Water page too.

Before

Underlined highlights in the copy

After

Plain copy, emphasis by weight only
O10

One font family throughout

Changed
FeedbackKeep same font throughout

What changed

The hand-drawn Cabin Sketch font is removed everywhere, along with the typewriter-style labels. Headings and quotes use Bitter and everything else uses Inter, the same pair as the rest of the site. This applies to the Water page as well.

Before

Sketch-style titles on the map

After

Same titles in Bitter

Before

Map before

After

Map after

6 points · mhsw-demo/water

Gift of Water

W1

Simpler, shorter page

Changed
FeedbackSimplify the page, less is more, make it easy to consume

What changed

The page is cut to seven blocks: the Safe Water Fund, the info strip, all water projects, why water, a well in her name, the appeal video (once) and five FAQs. Removed: the breadcrumbs, the whiteboard “How does it work?” graphic, the drag-to-explore map, the donor quote cards, the duplicate completed-wells gallery and the “Choose your well” rows. At desktop width it is about a third shorter (roughly 4,300px, down from 6,500px), with one main button per block.

Why

Each block answers one question, in order: give now; what can I fund; why does it matter; can it carry someone's name; can I see it; any questions? Generous spacing and a single tinted band for the projects keep it quick to read on a phone.

Content to confirmShort new copy throughout: the hero sentence, the projects intro, the card lines and the Why water paragraph.

Before

Whole page before

After

Whole page after

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On a phone
W2

Carousel of every water item

New design
FeedbackInclude module which showcases all water items like on current site – carousel of wells, borehole etc.

What changed

A new All water projects carousel holds a card for every item on the live water page: Water Pump £190, Dig-A-Well £660, Mini Solar-Powered Borehole £2,000, Community Well £2,600, Deep Borehole £5,000 (Malawi), and the Mali Borehole Fund crowdfund with its progress bar. Each card shows a photo, the type, one line, where it's available, who it serves, the price and a Donate button that opens the donation menu on that item. It scrolls with arrows, swipe or keyboard, and a link to Major Giving covers bigger projects.

Why it looks like this

Every card lists the same facts in the same order (type, name, what it is, where, who, price), so items are easy to compare, and Donate is always in the same place. Three cards fit on desktop with the next one peeking in; on a phone the next card peeks to invite a swipe. Putting the crowdfund in the carousel means it doesn't need a block of its own.

Content to confirmPrices and locations come from muslimhands.org.uk/giving/our-work/water. The live page itself gives two different “people served” figures for Community Well and Deep Borehole, so please confirm those. The £5,240 crowdfund total is a demo figure.

Before

“Choose your well” rows at the bottom of the page

After

All water projects carousel

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On a phone
W3

Opens on the Safe Water Fund

New design
FeedbackOpen on safe water fund

What changed

The page now opens on the Safe Water Fund: one plain sentence (“Your gift joins others in one fund that builds wells, boreholes and water pumps wherever the need is greatest”), a photo, and a quick-give card with the live amounts £25, £50 and £100, an Other field and a Donate button. The button opens the donation menu with the fund and amount already chosen, and the menu now starts on the fund too.

Why it looks like this

The first screen asks for one simple decision, an amount, using the same amount buttons as the donation menu, so the next step feels familiar. On a phone the card overlaps the photo so Donate stays above the fold. Once or monthly, and Zakat or Sadaqah, sit in a quiet note rather than as selling points.

Content to confirmThe hero sentence is new copy.

Before

Opened on “Give the Gift of Water” and a video

After

Safe Water Fund with quick give

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On a phone, Donate above the fold
W4

Breadcrumbs removed

Removed
FeedbackRemove breadcrumbs menu

What changed

The row of links (Water, Water Pump, Dig-A-Well, Solar-Powered Well, Community Well, Deep Borehole, Crowdfunding) is gone, and the page starts straight on the fund. Finding a specific item is now the job of the projects carousel and its filters (W2, W6).

Before

Breadcrumbs above the title

After

Starts on the fund

Before

Three lines of links on a phone

After

On a phone
W5

Giving in someone's name, told as a story

Changed
FeedbackGiving in the name of someone shown in content of the page (Testimonial?) not interactive

What changed

The interactive naming is gone: no “Name a well” button and no “£150 + your name” option, and the donation menu no longer asks for a name. A new A well in her name block tells the story of Lamia Tatari, who was surprised with a well built in her name, alongside a plaque photo and a note that every plaque holds up to 30 characters and the name is added at checkout. Each well in the donation menu says “Every well carries a plaque. Add the name at checkout”, the same wording as the live site.

Why

Naming is shown as proof (a real story and a real plaque) rather than as a form field, which keeps the donation menu short and matches how the live checkout collects the name. The photo caption says where the photo is from, and the quote has no attribution because the words are not Lamia's.

Content to confirmThe pull-quote reuses existing page copy. Please send a direct quote from Lamia if Muslim Hands Canada has one, and confirm it's fine to name her. Please also confirm the live checkout collects plaque names.

Before

Donor story with a “Name a well” button

After

A well in her name: a story, nothing to fill in

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On a phone
W6

Filter by location, well type and cost

New design
FeedbackCreate filter function for locations, well types, cost – like on MG page?

What changed

Above the carousel sits a filter bar in the Major Giving style, with three fields: Location, Well type (hand pump, dug well, community well, borehole, solar-powered) and Cost (under £250, £250 to £999, £1,000 to £2,999, £3,000+). Each option shows how many projects it would leave, and active filters appear as chips you can remove. A count reads, for example, “Showing 2 of 6 projects”. If nothing matches, the page offers to clear the filters or give to the Safe Water Fund instead.

Why it looks like this

It reuses the Major Giving pattern the team pointed to: labelled fields that are each one big tap target, counts before you commit, and chips that show and undo what's applied. Native selects use the phone's own picker. A dead end becomes a prompt to give to the fund rather than an empty screen.

Before

No way to filter

After

Filtered to Pakistan, £1,000 to £2,999

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The same filters on a phone

2 points · mhz-demo/zakat-page-d

Zakat

Z1

Make it obvious it's a helpful AI tool

New design
FeedbackChatbot needs to be more prominent that it's a helpful AI tool

What changed

The hero's “Ask about your Zakat” button is replaced by an AI Zakat assistant card: a gold AI tag, one line on what it does (“It calculates your Zakat, answers your questions and builds your basket with you”), an “Ask me anything about your Zakat…” box, four example questions, and the line “Answers follow our scholar-checked Zakat policy. For complex cases, speak to our team.” The header button now reads Ask AI, and the launcher is larger and says “Ask the AI assistant”. A one-time greeting introduces the assistant; it can be dismissed, and on phones it waits until the hero card has scrolled away. The calculator stays as a text link.

Why it looks like this

The assistant is now the first thing on the page instead of a secondary button, and the example questions show people what to ask. The same orb, AI tag and green and gold colours appear in the header, hero, launcher, greeting and chat, so it reads as one trustworthy tool rather than a gimmick. The scholar-checked line sits right next to the input, which answers “can I rely on this?” at the moment someone types.

Before

The assistant was a small button and a corner widget

After

AI assistant card in the hero, “Ask AI” in the header

Before

On a phone, a corner widget

After

On a phone: greeting once the hero card scrolls away

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The AI card in the hero on a phone
Z2

Three-column AI workspace

New design
FeedbackAi function – 3 collum on desktop with left = chat centre = donation items right = building your basket. On mobile this would have to be a hidden build your basket section and the other two merged together were the chat stops and donation items start.

What changed

Every way into the assistant now opens a full-screen workspace with three numbered columns: 1 Ask (the chat), 2 Donation items (the Zakat-eligible appeals as photo cards with amounts and an Add button) and 3 Your Zakat basket. When the assistant recommends causes, they move to the top of the middle column marked “Suggested for you”, with a suggested share already picked, and the chat offers “Add all three”. The basket shows the Zakat due and how it was worked out, an allocation bar (“£300 of £475 allocated · £175 left”), editable amounts, an optional “Allocate the rest to where it's needed most”, and “Give £300 Zakat”. On a phone it is one scroll: the chat, then the donation items straight after it, with the basket hidden behind a bar at the bottom (“Basket · 2 items · £300 · View”) that opens a sheet. Tablets get chat and items side by side, with the same basket bar.

Why it looks like this

The three columns follow how people actually give: ask, choose, give. Numbering them 1, 2, 3 makes that order obvious. Moving recommendations into the middle column keeps the chat short and gives each option a full card with a photo, which keeps the human side visible. The basket stays in view on desktop, so people always know how much Zakat is left to place; on a phone the bar keeps the running total visible without taking space from the chat or the items.

Content to confirmLivelihoods amounts (£60, £150, £400) and its photo are placeholders. Please confirm the basket rules: suggested splits are 50/30/20, “allocate the rest” goes to the Zakat fund, and anything given beyond the Zakat due is described as Sadaqah. The checkout is a demo and takes no payment.

Before

Desktop: the chat in a panel over the page

After

Desktop: chat, donation items, basket

Before

Phone: the chat as a full-screen sheet

After

Phone: the donation items start where the chat stops

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Basket with the allocation bar and “allocate the rest”
Phone: basket sheet from the bottom bar
Tablet: two columns plus the basket bar
Demo checkout confirmation